sábado, 11 de octubre de 2014

Expectations composition




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Name: Guillermo Lobato Flores Date:22 august 2014  Group: 9
 

«My course expectations» (8 – 10 lines)
Paragraph 1: what I want
Features
Sentence
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1 topic sentence
I don’t want to take again the English class in next semester for a third time.


1 supporting sentence
Advanced English is a subject that belongs to a first semester study plan and I’m coursing my seventh semester at Tec.


1 supporting sentence
This is the third time I’m taking the same course.


1 supporting sentence



Paragraph 2: what i have to do
Features
Sentence
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1 topic sentence
Be completely responsible with all the things about English class


1 supporting sentence
Do all my homework on time and correct the mistakes


1 supporting sentence
Come every day to class to practice the language


1 supporting sentence
I must pay attention to Monste during the class and participate in the class activities.


Paragraph 3: Conclusion
Features
Sentence
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1 closing sentence
If I do all the before points I’ll get a better management of the language


1 closing sentence
Giving the 100% of me in this subject I would get a higher score than the last  one.




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complete sentences
Sentence LACKS subject or verb



sentence has both subject and verb
language point to be assessed
less than 4 sentences contain an adjective
At least 4 sentences contain an adjective
At least 6 sentences contain an adjective
At least 8 sentences contain an adjective
All sentences contain an adjective

Achievement intro